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Monday, October 27, 2014

I am from

I am from sadness, sexism, and soft blankets
Ice cream, pets, work, and food
I am from creativity, cats, and cake
Pencils, paper, and large erasers
I am from marbling, manners, and manic
High roads, trees, wallflowers
I am forgetful, forgiving, and floral 
Nice, funny, rad
I am radical, rain, and rat packs
Occult, sable, wallflower
I will be great, magnificent, success
I will succeed, I will be great, magnificent, extraordinary
I will be me  
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17 comments:

  1. Colleen SagulaOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I love your ending. Your poem is so unique and really stands out to me. Awesome job!

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  2. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    This poem really express you and tells how your personality. It's a really good poem.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I like how you feel about yourself, and thanks for "taking me to the store" twice... The App Store is pretty nice

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  4. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    Trust in my opinion, you have succeeded. Your poem was great, correction, IS great.

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  5. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I thought it was great and I like how you listed all the things that make you, you.

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  6. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    Awh Paige I loved your poem so much. I loved your ending line but I also disagree because you are all of those things now and you always will be, dear.

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  7. JillianOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I really liked how you incorporated every little thing about you . Great job!

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  8. ZmzkzkOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I liked all the different characteristics that you wrote about yourself, it was very well written!

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  9. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I liked how you talked about everything that revolves around your life and your likes, good job.

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  10. TerionaOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    Paige, I loved your poem. My favorite part was at the very end when you said, "I will succeed, I will be great, magnificent, extraordinary / I will be me."
    That was very uplifting and powerful. Great job!

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  11. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I like how you said you will be great, magnificent, and success. It shows you have great confidence in yourself.

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  12. Ashley BaragaOctober 30, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    I really love your poem! I love the part "I will succeed, I will be great, magnificent, extraordinary. I will be me". I think that was such positivity!

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  13. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:05 AM

    I loved the end when you explained that you succeed, you will be great, magnificent and extraordinary.

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  14. juarketsquareOctober 30, 2014 at 9:05 AM

    Paige,
    Great job. I really enjoyed your style and flow to the poem. Your one word descriptions are very key!

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  15. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:05 AM

    I like how you listed everything you loved and defined it at where you're from

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  16. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 9:05 AM

    I like how you expressed you at your worst with the sadness, sexism, and soft blankets, but at the same time expressed the positives.

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